Pretty good, pretty good.
Well. I gotta say I enjoyed it. I'm not saying it's the greatest thing since sex, but, still it's good, and I know you guys put a lot of work into this, so I gotta acknowledge that.
I gotta tell ya, though, that "waterlollies" spoof part? CLASSIC.
The only things I think could use some work were some of the lines and the presentation of illwill. Of course, this is just coming from my own personal taste. I wish I could say how it could have been improved upon, but it's one of those things that you just can't come up with it right away, lol.
However, I must say that I did enjoy this. It really was good work. :)
PS: Sorry I can't really offer much constructive criticism, seeing as how my own Flash background, is, well, nonexistent. XD