I'm not even going to try to offer any constructive criticism to help you improve on this, as this, in my opinion, needs very, VERY little improvement.
The length itself is an amazing feat, and I can tell you're very dedicated to your work. I've actually followed quite a few of your animations, and I'm always impressed with them. Excellent story in this one, too. :)
You have a real gift, I'm telling you that right now. I love this piece. The audio sync problem that only became evident near the end didn't alter my opinion on it at all, I was so wrapped up in the story unfolding before me.
Beautifully, beautifully done. :)
Very good, indeed.
I am atheist, and I approve of this video.
Seriously, though, you have talent. Not many people realize it, but even with great music and art, it still takes an extra something to draw out emotion. You definitely have that something here. I'll admit, I felt a little bummed about the Christianity point working its way in at the end there, but I quickly got over that, and still appreciated the message that you were trying to get across.
And so, I give you a 9/10 and 4/5. And no, you didn't lose points because of the christianity thing, but because of little nitpicks in the animation that could have been polished. Then again, not everyone is a professional animator.
It was very good and uplifting, I would definitely watch this again. :)
That's some imagination you got there.
Well, I'll be damned. That was probably one of the most enjoyable flashes I've seen in a long time! You, sir, are VERY creative. The animation was fluid and smooth, the graphics clean, and well, hell, it's just an all-around awesome flash! Sorry I don't have anything to say in the way of constructive criticism, but that's only because I honestly can't find anything to criticize on. Plus, the flash executes the moral from the quote at the ending flawlessly. :)
Top-notch work, man. Keep it up! ^_^
I'm guessing this is another one of those "joke" flashes that are so horrible that people feel an undescribable need to give the highest rating possible?
Just...I'm wondering what compelled you to make this.
Not my cup of tea, I'll tell you that.
However, I will say this: The narrator voice was pretty well done.
Pretty good, pretty good.
Well. I gotta say I enjoyed it. I'm not saying it's the greatest thing since sex, but, still it's good, and I know you guys put a lot of work into this, so I gotta acknowledge that.
I gotta tell ya, though, that "waterlollies" spoof part? CLASSIC.
The only things I think could use some work were some of the lines and the presentation of illwill. Of course, this is just coming from my own personal taste. I wish I could say how it could have been improved upon, but it's one of those things that you just can't come up with it right away, lol.
However, I must say that I did enjoy this. It really was good work. :)
PS: Sorry I can't really offer much constructive criticism, seeing as how my own Flash background, is, well, nonexistent. XD
Well, if you enjoyed it, you enjoyed it.
Thanks for the review, man. =)
I gotta say, I loved this, both Part 1 and 2. This actually hits quite close to home, so even more bonus points for you. I gotta say, though, for something based on true events, you seem to have a much more positive outlook than a lot of people in the same situation, so my hat goes off to you. You know, if I had a hat. Ha ha.
And hey, you have some pretty solid skills, so don't put yourself down over them. Also, I love the fact you used Angels & Airwaves in this. AWESOME.
I wish I could offer you a comment that didn't follow the standard "LAWLZ this is made of EPIC and WIN/YOU WIN TEH INTRANETZ" bit, but unfortunately, my brain is not all there to say the least. XD
So again, keep up the great work! You have awesome skills, and I thoroughly enjoyed this. :)
A lot of shit like this happens to me, but it got to the point where I realized I can make the best out of them by telling them to other people. Make them feel better about their lives. :3
The soundtrack is my favorite part of making the episode...everything else bores me. D:
Thanks for the comment. :3
Wow, I'm blown away by this. Normally, I wouldn't touch anything relating to Street Fighter and Mortal Kombat with a 20 ft. pole, but, this? This is EPIC, in every sense of the word. Gripping, climactic, emotional....man, it felt like an entire movie, even though it was really only one fight. Pure gold. Heh, I noticed you used After Effects, too. Seeing what you can do with it, it's inspiring me to try and figure out the program for myself(I have it, but I can barely do a thing with it, lol.).
Anyway, this is awesome. Absolutely stunning. Amazing. Now I'm gonna shut up because I can't think of anything else to say.
Keep it up. ^_^
Awesomeness in a can....
I've seen Eps. 3 and 4 so far, and they're both amazing. Top-notch work. However, there's one trivial detail that makes me favor this one over Episode 4(not that I'm dumping on Ep. 4, since it was awesome. I loved it.).
The detail? I noticed you used music from the N64 classic, "Blast Corps" during the Yoshi/Super Metal Sonic fight scene. Personally, I'd love to be able to get a hold of that. But I'm amazed that you incorporated the music into this episode, and it worked well. ...Great, now I'm trying to imagine what it would be like if Sonic stumbled into the Blast Corps universe, lol. XD
Anyway, this is first-rate stuff. Keep it up. I look forward to Ep. 5.
Ooooh my god, that was funny! You're killing me! That's the shit! My favorite lines:"No, no, and fucking no!" and someother one about the towers. Good job, man. Nice!
Take that, DK!
About time Diddy came out of DK's shadow. Too bad Luigi doesn't have the same courage to do that to Mario. Anyway, nice vid. Can't wait to see your next one.
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